Your book is wonderful. I mentioned to you that the suspense you built up until the end concerning why Portia's parents separated was brilliant. That is why readers will not want to put the book down. I was so impressed with the research you must have done concerning the medical aspect of diabetes. I even love how you wrote the words for the weather broadcast by the meteorologist on television reporting about the hurricane. Great Job! Overall, the book is great. I really feel for Portia and everything going on in her life. You built a character in Portia that I want to know more about and know more about what will happen in her future.
- A. Yamada, NBC Teacher, Sixth Avenue Elementary School, Los Angeles, California
"How did everything go so wrong so quickly?" laments the almost 11-year-old narrator of Price's debut novel, after her parents tell her she must learn to administer her own insulin shots rather than rely on them to do it. Portia then flashes back a year, to when she was diagnosed with diabetes, adjusted her diet, and learned how to test her blood sugar. In the present, a visit from her cousin, who also has diabetes, comforts Portia, as both girls deal with their health-related problems. Attending a summer camp for diabetics, Portia reaches out to an ornery girl who is also afraid of giving herself insulin shots. Back home, Portia worries about the growing tension between her parents and fears they will divorce. While the story may reassure diabetic readers, it's weighed down by extraneous, stilted dialogue. The story's histrionic tenor reaches a crescendo when a truck slams into the van that Portia and several family members are riding in--while fleeing a hurricane--and Portia requires surgery for a broken arm. Portia's close bond with her caring grandmother adds an affecting note to this overwrought novel. Ages 6–12.
- Publishers Weekly, Reviewed on: 03/28/2011
No one's life is perfect, and it's dealing with those imperfections that makes us better people. "Portia's Incredible Journey" a novel for children focusing on the constant challenges that young people face through their life, and as Portia's Grandmother puts it, weathering the succession of storms. With a powerful message for youth readers and much to inspire, "Portia's Incredible Journey" is a strong addition for any youth fiction collection.
- Midwest Book Review (Oregon, WI USA)
Portia’s Incredible Journey is a heartwarming story about an eleven-year-old girl named Portia, who must brave a challenging journey of personal crisis and self-discovery, learning to understand the sun always shines after the rain is gone. With her grandma’s sage advice, her perseverance, and the unconditional love of her parents, Portia blossoms into a mature young lady who learns to love and be loved.
The heroine created by Ms. Emma Price is a positive role model for boys and girls facing difficult circumstances and going through their own troubles.
- Wendy Li., LMT, Portola Middle School, Orange, CA
Portia’s Incredible Journey is indeed an incredible book. The author deftly handles the subject of diabetes and how to handle the process of using a needle everyday even when you are too scared to do it yourself. Portia also has to deal with a bully and the author handles this subject matter quite well. Ms. Price fills the reader with lots of good information while being entertaining and engaging. It is a book that should be in every elementary school library and also in public libraries. A necessary purchase.
- Sherri Ginsberg, School Librarian-Hillsides, Pasadena, CA
“I finished Portia’s Incredible Journey this morning. I REALLY enjoyed it. I had tears in my eyes a few times. It’s an amazing first book!”
- Janik Sundher Hundal, Literacy Coach, Los Angeles Academy, Los Angeles Unified School District
“Portia’s Incredible Journey is filled with adventures and mysteries. This is a page turner that will comfort and enlighten young readers.”
- Sue Ganz-Schmitt, author of Even Superheroes Get Diabetes
"As an educator, I know how important it is for children to read quality literature books, such as Portia's Incredible Journey, that are culturally responsive and relevant."
- Beverly Jean Crosby, Principal, Fifty Second Street Elementary School, Los Angeles, California
"Portia is a likable character and I enjoyed reading this book."
- Zachary C., 5TH grade, West Clayton Elementary School, Clayton, NC
"Portia's Incredible Journey was so entertaining I couldn't stop reading it until I finished. This book is great for young people to read and learn how their peers handle serious problems maturely. It was rewarding to see how Portia grew and matured."
- Pinkie Young, RN, BSN, MS, author of One Child's Faith, One Child's Courage
"I loved, loved, loved reading your book! I took it to Hawaii. While on the plane, I could not put it down. While sitting on the balcony over looking the partial ocean view, I read with complete enjoyment. You captured the camping experience. I could visually see, smell, and feel the part where the girls went horseback riding!"
- G. Jackson-Bassett, NBC Teacher, Castle Heights Elementary School, Los Angeles, California
"I felt truly excited about sharing Portia's Incredible Journey with my third grade class. Because of the characters' realistic dialogue and Mrs. Price's enticing storyline, they couldn't wait to see what happened next. We are all looking forward to Portia's next journey!"
- Connie Carpenter, 3rd grade teacher, Library Committee Chairperson, Charnock Road School, Los Angeles, California